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He’s gone
And I’m sorry
How do I ask?
How should I respond?
Are you sad?
Do you wish he hadn’t done it
Did you love him?
How’d it happen?
Should I cry, Should I laugh?
Should I pretend it never happened?
Are you ok? Do you need a friendly face?
Or should I just sit back down?
And let it disappear.
©2004-2009 ~CreenaLezi27
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This is about Mr. Wongs son. I heard he commited suicide. I don't really know all the details about it, but I wrote this poem during math (how fitting) This is dedicated to him on his birthday, and his son.

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:icontigereyez:
He did commit suicide. He was a basketball coach. It was horrible.

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Oh the Joyz of Ritilin.....:floating:
:iconimperfecttears6:
woah I didn't know the part about suicide. that is awful....so very sad....

good poem though

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"Live without your sunlight.
Love without your heartbeat."

"There's such a fooled heart
Beatin' so fast
In search of new dreams.
A love that will last
Within your heart.
I'll place the moon
Within your heart."
:iconcanadia-eh:
i know

i feel really bad for mr. wong
on top of the sad fellings:(
his son killed himself the day before mr. wongs birthday
:(
:(

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^listen to the whole song it will make u smile
:iconbaka-keokeo:
it was awful when Wyyat blurted out "WHO DIED?" Right then and there i cringed in llike, awfulnees, and then Mr.Wong replied. He was Angry and the rest of the week i thought about him. And how he felt.

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"My wine shop needs Stake"
:iconcreenalezi27:
I know. I don't even know why I wrote this poem. Maybe it's because, deep down inside, I think Mr. Wong is a great person who deserves better, despite how rude I am to him. Maybe I should be nicer...what do you think?

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Misery Loves Company.... Come Here.
:brushteeth:
:iconcreenalezi27:
I know. I don't even know why I wrote this poem. Maybe it's because, deep down inside, I think Mr. Wong is a great person who deserves better, despite how rude I am to him. Maybe I should be nicer...what do you think?

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Misery Loves Company.... Come Here.
:brushteeth:
:iconbaka-keokeo:
he is a really nice guy, i spend almost evry day with him after school. Hes kinda i dono grouchy sumtimes, but deep down hes a nice guy. You do kinda talk back to the teachers, but i repect that in you. Although when they get frusterated Stop.

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"My wine shop needs Stake"

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